Date: August 30, 2005 @ 12:52 PM
that high pitched sax should stop after about 4 bars, and then something should come in for the verses, and you can bring it back for the chorus of something, at the moment it just feel like its coming from the sky at the begining (which is good) but it don't seem to make it down to us.
Date: August 30, 2005 @ 12:53 PM
oh and don't loop for soooo long when nothing happenes... its annoying... don't worry i used to do the same shitty thing, till i made myself sick of it